Her excellent opening has a great middle and a unique end. I rarely see poems that are this strong all the way through. It opens with:
Their branches reach out
heated imploring
heated imploring
mounds of grass like dry
skirts twisted
around ankles
skirts twisted
around ankles
And ends with this beautiful, spacial sense that transforms in to multiple things by the final word:
his trees beckon us
up blue wind-swept heaven
up blue wind-swept heaven
at the edge
of the canvas
of the canvas
on the verge of escaping
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